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VOIDBOUND
Offline 09-01-2018, 12:05 AM (This reply was last modified: 09-20-2018 01:48 AM by rogueofspace.)(Edited by rogueofspace.)
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VOIDBOUND
--> Four adolescents want to play a video game. Interplanetary Shenanigans: Commence.

**** Voidbound (couldn't think of a better title) originally was posted on MSPFA site, link here --> https://mspfa.com/?s=26454&p=1<--
I won't post the first 57 pages here so please read the beginning there.

Feel free to post commands here! ****

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Offline 09-01-2018, 01:48 AM
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RE: VOIDBOUND
i think the link isn’t working, for me at least

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❝ all your flaws and i still think you are perfect ❞
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Offline 09-01-2018, 01:58 AM
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RE: VOIDBOUND
(09-01-2018 01:48 AM)sinical Wrote:  i think the link isn’t working, for me at least

Fixed! Thanks for telling me.
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Offline 09-02-2018, 03:19 AM
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RE: VOIDBOUND
Xalhal: Locate package.
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Oh globes.
Tortoxdad is DEFINITELY not going to give you the package easily. Looks like you'll have to preapare for a strife.

Xalhal: Prepare for strife.

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You equip your deudly weapon. You don't know why you spelt it that way.

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You ready yourself. If only you could grab the prize and abscond, maybe you could avoid the inevitable strife! If only...

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OH GLOBES

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Offline 09-17-2018, 09:12 PM (This reply was last modified: 09-17-2018 09:15 PM by rogueofspace.)(Edited by rogueofspace.)
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RE: VOIDBOUND
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Oh globes. Tortoxdad really didn't pull his punches today. Or hooves. Well at least the package conveniently landed on your face. Mission accomplished!

Tortoxdad looks at you with disapproval. He huffs at you something about not being a weenie and standing up for yourself, but you already now how this ends.
Yes dad, you'll start acting like a real troll.
Yes dad, you'll bring your favorite delu[xe vegetable mix.
Yes dad, you'll find a matesprit soon.

You know your custodian is doing this beacuse he wants you to be able to survive at least till the Exile, but you can't help being mildly irritated by the everyday trampling of your body and self worth.

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In the end daily strifes did give you some endurance, even for your caste. Your body almost doesn't hurt now!

Overall you are feeling positive! You are going to play a fun game with your best friend, in the safety of your hive. Nothing is going to stop you.

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You go into your hive, gently put the box on the table and open it. This is it. Finally, after all this anguish and rain, you get...

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A DISC!!!!

If you knew how to dance, you would have performed one now.

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It's time. Your frond is shaking with excitement. You carefully slide the disc in...

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OH WHAT WAS THAT
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Offline 09-20-2018, 05:47 AM
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RE: VOIDBOUND

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Offline 09-21-2018, 02:11 AM
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RE: VOIDBOUND
(09-20-2018 05:47 AM)sinical Wrote:  
0u0 Thank you for the awesome comment!! Don't worry about interrupting, that's what this memo is for. Just post the suggestions here, or anything really. Sometimes i'll take the reins when it's time for **serious plot** but for now suggestions welcome!
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Offline 09-27-2018, 02:21 AM
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RE: VOIDBOUND
Xalhal: Check if there's a back up power generator every self sufficient troll should have

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SUDDENLY a wild character selection card appears!!! You probably click on the mysterious shadowy figure; alas the author has absolutely no coding skills and the traitorous card is actually a ruse. Disappointed but resigned, you continue onto next page.
Do not lose hope readers, for we will be back to the trolls side shortly.

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As you chat with your buddy you start installing the enigmatic SBURB/ SGRAUAB/ whatever game. You are not sure if it's really bugged like Eisen said. Everything looks fine to you. Nothing suspicious, just a normal, not cursed,, piece of code


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Ok
y̧ou̧ a͡r̡e not feel̛in͜g t͞h̸ís͟ ̧g̷ame, it really is some shitty horror story

P̧̗̘̝̗ ̸̘ ̸͍͈͈̼ ͇̯͙͉ ̨̙̯̦̻̙ ̰̮̥ ̡̦̪̮͙̪ ̘̝̥͎̙̬͝ ͓̩͖̙ ̵͎̹̼̼̲͈̜ ̴̰̮͍̘̠ ̷̭̼ ̲̞̯͇̝̺ ͇͖̠̖ ̡ ̯̞̪̜̦ ͏ ͇̭͙̪̤͉ ̶ ̞̹̻̱͢ ̥̤̥̯ ̡̝͚ ̺͎̫̺ ̬̹͉ ̼͘ ̭̣͕̳͕̰ ̬̤̰̮̗̪ͅ ͓̣̼̹̣̭ ̧ ̧̹͚ ̛͓͓̣͈̹͎̣ ̬͔̫̦͚ ̢̭͈̭͎̼̰ ̧̞̱͇͉͍̘ ͕͓̺̼̼̲̦ ̨̺̖̟̘͖ ͝ ̱͇̜̼̼̞ ̢̲̥͈̻̪ ͍̖̣ ̜͞ ̱̤͕̭̗͇ ̸͙̣͈̭ ͙̰̻̬͙̳̟ ̡̱̱̘̺̪ ͉̳̼ ̗̱͖͉̞̱͜ ̰̘͎̲ ̹̖̝ ̱ ̩̦͕̻͇ ̻̫̹̪̖̼ͅ ̠ ͙̣̩̖ ͍͎̗͔͙͇ ̦̥̝ ̹͞H̫͙ ̸ͅ ̲͖͖ ͕ ̢̩̼ ͈̻̪͍ ̟̟̻͕̩̲͙ ̙̬͇͖̼ ̢̫͓̼͉̹ ̺̘͡ ͈ ͎̪͈͖͇͡ ̢̺̼ͅ ̫͖̤̟̭ ̶̰͇͚͙ ͝ ͍̮̹̣̬̲ ̷̖̪̖̝͙ͅ ͚͙̠͟e̦̦͉͡ ̲͙̘̲́ ͙̼͇̱̳̻ ̰ ̘̩ ̯ ͏͇̟̜̪̼ ̦̗̠̰̳̀ ͎̹͙͎ l̻ ̞̗͍͕̙̭͓ ̘͉̫ ͘ ̨̥͈̗̪̲ ̀ ̧̺ ̝̼ ̯̻͕ ̡͇̳͓̠̩̫̣ ̯̥̳͉͖͇̳ ̘͝ ̥̣̻͟ͅ ͙͞ ̵̙̤̖ͅl͕͞ ͍̫̯̟̱̬͠ ̴̖̤͇͎̺̮̤ ̜̞͖ͅ ̞̖ ̶̖̫̤̝̩̖ ̳̞̰ ͈̱͚͓̺͍̫͡ ͈̳̟ ̖͚͟ ̰̠͜ ̵̥̖̯̫͍o̳̫̳̭͍͟
̸̩͖̩͖ ̧̟̰ ̖͡ ̖͈̜̳ ̼̺̥̀ͅ ͞ ̱͖͕͚ ̙͕̻̣̠ ̶̹̞̖̠̹ ̣̫̫̫͖͟ ̺͓͚͎͕̬̼ ͏̬̩͉̬̥ ̲̪ ̸͎͎͇̺̖̳̮ ͖̝̙ ̤̘̖̪̹͇̰ ͓͎̼̤͍̟̩ ̠̗̫͚̤ ̺͎̞̞̰͜ ̰ ̪̻ ͉͕̤̮̦ ͏̮̠̙ ̳̗̖ ̰̮͙ ̞̼ ͉͉̣ ̳̠̘̰̝̱ ͏̹̯͇̯̙͙̗ ̱̦̦̠̲͚́ͅ ҉̞͓ ͍̻̲͉͔̙̲ ̗ ̦̝̜ ̴̲͙ͅ ̢͓ ͕͈̲̳̱ ̭̟̦̼ ͏̝̥̗͔̻̫ ͇̜̯ͅͅ ṇ̹̭̙̲͎͇ ̦͈̣̲ ̤̞̟͜ ̖̥͉̫͇ ͔͖̥̪ ̀ ̸ ͚͈̺͚͇̥̘ ̺̹ ̹͚͍̗ ̘ ̣͖̺̤ ̧̻͚̘̘̟̜̮ ̡̳ ̰̪ ̛̥̤͈͔͖̥ ̟ ̖̺ ̡͚̬͓̞͉̜ ̸͉̼̞̟c̥ ͖̜͈͘ͅ
̻͙͝
̖̣͢ ̯̣͖̺ ͇̗̳͈ ͍̟̲͜ͅ ́ ̜̲͙ ̰͓͈̣̫ ̝̜͍͉͚͙̱ ̦͖̰ ̩̳͕͙͓͍̀ͅ ͔̣͚͓̱͢ ҉̝ ̶͔ ̡̘ ̟̤͈̻͜ ̡̻ ̣̟̦̦̦͔̩r͍͡ ͍͉̪̖͔ ͈͉̞ ͈̗͓͔͙ ̵̦̦͉ ̷̞̘̬ ̶̣ ̟͈͙̦ ̯͘ ͙̱̭̞̘̕ ̭ ̼̘̖ͅ ̡ ̸ ̡͍͉̜͎̘̝̜ ̶̘̭ ̛̜̝̯̻ ̪̖͇̹̬ ͖͖͔̤̤̬
̪ ̴ ̮̙͔͚̕ ͔̤͕̠͔̗ ̴̩͖ ̜̖̗̭̘̳ ̞͕͍͔̪̟̗͡ ̞̼̪̜̩̳̫ ̜͍̀ ̣̥ ̡̥̳ ̸̩̰͔͚ͅ ͔̜͙̳̞ ҉̼̖̖̥̺ ͓ ͙̲͕̺͕̜͟ ̣ ͍̞̦̕ ̥̤̩̰̻ ̱̥̱̺̫͜ ̮̟̣̜̰͉͞ ̟̞̞ ͏͓ ͚̩͈͓̤̱̤̕ ̫̗̦͠ ̠̜̺͖ ͏ ̨̭̯̦͍̳͍ ̶̝̖ ̼̤͚͞ ̜͔͟ ̲̕ͅ ̴͖̩ ̝ ̧̯̝͇̩͎ ̸̜̥͖̻̖͖̝ ̡̲͇̞̥ ͖͓̗̀ ̪̩̗̼̳i͚̦̰̬̠ͅ

OH FUCK OFF


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Sudden notification ping shakes you out of your stupor, definitely not making you scream in horror.

Wait, how long were you staring at your screen? You feel like a fool. One small haunting and you almost pissed your pants. This isn't a big deal.
Now you are going to answer your other friend, and you are definitely NOT relieved beacuse of her presence.
Miraculously you walk SC through the download process and instruct her on the installation. She is easily the most optimistic person in the entire universe and her sheer sincerity can make you smile even at your lowest, but she is not... tech savvy.
You would never admit that to yourself, but chatting with her made you a little less scared.


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Eisens message interrupts your chat with SC.








This really is such a bullshit.


h͇̯͔̼͢a̰̟̦̟ ̵͖̹̘̗̲̭h͍͙̙̫͉̹̗̕a͙̘̗̜̯͍ͅ ̨̭͎̹ ̷̝͚͓̻ ̴̲͉ ̠͍ ̥̼ ̛̘͕͇̩͈̝ ̘̼̹̞͜h͏̝̳͖̗͇̬ ̫̩̖̥͕ ͎̻̖͎̗̠͡a̭̩̳͍̲͜ ̖͖ͅ ̸ ̪̺ ̲͍̬̼͍̬ ͙͎͚͉ ͙̦͇̪̳̮̝ ̡̤͔̣̖͎͕ͅ ̙̭̳̹͞ ̴͚͍̮̪̦ ̘̞͍͕͚͔͙ ̪̟̦̝͉̪͜ͅ ̫̪͈ ͎̟̬ ̪͕͇h̝ ͇̲͟ ̝͘ ͔̺͙̝͚̻̤͡ ͕ ̭ ̘̝̣͖̮͇ ͏̭̻ ͜ ̱̥a̜̣͓̰

shut up
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Offline 10-10-2018, 01:20 AM
Reply: #9
RE: VOIDBOUND
Xalhal: Ok now check if there's a back up power generator every self sufficient troll should have

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You do have a back up power generator, but you do not have a back up husktop!! How could you be so careless! Your other friend always told you to have at least 7 back up computers somewhere, but you didn't listen.
Now look where that led you. Your husktop is fried and you are unable to play the game with CG. This day couldn't get any worse.

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Your rant is interrupted by a ping from your pamlhusk. At least your sorry ass didn't forget to keep one way to contact the outside world.

Xalhal: Get ready for a hike

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Looks like you'll have to prepare for a longer outing and there is no way you could go out without your holy paint. Getting this stuff on your face is such a pa- no, nope, not at all you love smearing white grubpaint on your cheeckblades haha.
Oh look a cute purrbeast poster! Looking at it every night helps you stave off the creeping emptiness you always feel at the back of your soul.

Xalhal: Hastily exit your hive.

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The storm rages on. Cold, acidic rain drops on your skin, chiller than your own blood. Wind jerks your voluminous hair in your eyes; you don't care.
You are a troll on a mission; the harsh weather is not going to deter you from it.
You hear a thunder roar behind, like mirthful messiahs themselves are laughing at your puny determination .
You are pretty sure it's just your wild imagination conjuring scary images but you are done with fear steering your actions.
You are going to play that game damn it all.

Tortoxdad snorts at you and tells you to watch your step in the forest.

New girl: Debut

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You are now an adolescent girl standing in her room, on a sunny, summer day. Give name please? (suggestions welcome!)
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Offline 10-16-2018, 06:35 AM
Reply: #10
RE: VOIDBOUND
Well the next update is going to take a while buut thats beacuse ive decided to redraw/remake the beginning of the story. It just looks like shiet. Also i want some suggestions to come up. Feel free to leave some!!
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