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VOIDBOUND
Offline 09-01-2018, 12:05 AM (This reply was last modified: 09-20-2018 01:48 AM by rogueofspace.)(Edited by rogueofspace.)
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VOIDBOUND
--> Four adolescents want to play a video game. Interplanetary Shenanigans: Commence.

**** Voidbound (couldn't think of a better title) originally was posted on MSPFA site, link here --> https://mspfa.com/?s=26454&p=1<--
I won't post the first 57 pages here so please read the beginning there.

Feel free to post commands here! ****

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Offline 09-01-2018, 01:48 AM
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RE: VOIDBOUND
i think the link isn’t working, for me at least

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Offline 09-01-2018, 01:58 AM
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(09-01-2018 01:48 AM)sinical Wrote:  i think the link isn’t working, for me at least

Fixed! Thanks for telling me.
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Offline 09-02-2018, 03:19 AM
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RE: VOIDBOUND
Xalhal: Locate package.
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Oh globes.
Tortoxdad is DEFINITELY not going to give you the package easily. Looks like you'll have to preapare for a strife.

Xalhal: Prepare for strife.

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You equip your deudly weapon. You don't know why you spelt it that way.

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You ready yourself. If only you could grab the prize and abscond, maybe you could avoid the inevitable strife! If only...

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OH GLOBES

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Offline 09-17-2018, 09:12 PM (This reply was last modified: 09-17-2018 09:15 PM by rogueofspace.)(Edited by rogueofspace.)
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Oh globes. Tortoxdad really didn't pull his punches today. Or hooves. Well at least the package conveniently landed on your face. Mission accomplished!

Tortoxdad looks at you with disapproval. He huffs at you something about not being a weenie and standing up for yourself, but you already now how this ends.
Yes dad, you'll start acting like a real troll.
Yes dad, you'll bring your favorite delu[xe vegetable mix.
Yes dad, you'll find a matesprit soon.

You know your custodian is doing this beacuse he wants you to be able to survive at least till the Exile, but you can't help being mildly irritated by the everyday trampling of your body and self worth.

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In the end daily strifes did give you some endurance, even for your caste. Your body almost doesn't hurt now!

Overall you are feeling positive! You are going to play a fun game with your best friend, in the safety of your hive. Nothing is going to stop you.

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You go into your hive, gently put the box on the table and open it. This is it. Finally, after all this anguish and rain, you get...

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A DISC!!!!

If you knew how to dance, you would have performed one now.

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It's time. Your frond is shaking with excitement. You carefully slide the disc in...

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OH WHAT WAS THAT
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Offline 09-20-2018, 05:47 AM
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RE: VOIDBOUND

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Offline Yesterday, 02:11 AM
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(09-20-2018 05:47 AM)sinical Wrote:  
0u0 Thank you for the awesome comment!! Don't worry about interrupting, that's what this memo is for. Just post the suggestions here, or anything really. Sometimes i'll take the reins when it's time for **serious plot** but for now suggestions welcome!
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