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Breath of Creation
Offline 01-17-2017, 09:03 PM (This reply was last modified: 01-17-2017 09:20 PM by Trusty McCoolguy.)(Edited by Trusty McCoolguy.)
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Breath of Creation
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Welcome to the Breath of Creation.


This is an incredible journey I hope to share with you, all about the creation of a planet and its creatures, and eventually its peoples, whoever (or whatever) they may be. Your planet will face challenges and achieve amazing accomplishments... however, if you fail to provide enough guidance, or guide too strongly, it may fail to overcome the odds. If you're lucky, you may meet one of your planet's inhabitants someday. Well, here goes: On to the story!

I promise you'll love this if you're into... snicker... worldbuilding.



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In your hands lay the power of a god. Unlike any other being that you know of (for your planet hasn't ever experienced this sort of... technology, or magic, you're sure) you have been brought to float among the stars without harm by unknown means. You take a deep breath, sudden and sharp, as you find yourself floating in a nebulous place, as though upon a cloud. As you watch, space, creation, begins before you. Small clouds of gas and dust begin to gather, and a planet is formed before you, millennia passing as though in fast forward even though you can feel the weight of each inexorable second as each of them ticks by.

You feel, for some reason, as though you have some sort of power over the creation of this planet, and your mind whispers choices at you.

'Pick,' it coaxes, as you watch the planet begin to grow into something more than a heap of rock floating in space orbiting (is that a binary solar system? It is-- twin stars, orange and purple) the nearest gravitational mass.

You gaze down at your hands, and then back at the planet taking root. What harm could it do? With a small smile, you decide to choose, even though you don't know if it will do anything. The fast forward pauses, as though awaiting a command, and you suddenly know what to do, and what you want.



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Now Loading Manual.txt...

Please input the desired Planet Name, Planet Size, Terrain Color, Ocean Color, and Atmosphere color. The atmosphere color will influence how the planet looks from space, as well as how the sky looks from the planet's perspective. The atmosphere will be a mix of gases, but you may also input a desired predominant gas, such as oxygen, nitrogen, or methane, for example.



Use the following format:

Planet Name: X
Planet Size: X
Terrain: X
Ocean: X
Atmosphere: X (color) Y (gas)



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Offline 01-17-2017, 09:48 PM
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RE: Breath of Creation
Planet name: Cactusplanet
Planet Size: Earth-like
Terrain: more rocky than muddy
Ocean: yes
Athmosphere: ???? colour, O2, CO2, H2S gases

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Offline 01-17-2017, 11:10 PM
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RE: Breath of Creation
Planet Name: MILLER-2
Planet Size: 7.3412K KILOMETERS
Terrain: ROCKY
Ocean: YES
Atmosphere: BLUE ; N2 & O2

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Offline 01-18-2017, 09:01 AM (This reply was last modified: 01-18-2017 09:10 AM by Star_Slayerr.)(Edited by Star_Slayerr.)
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RE: Breath of Creation
planet name: éclat
planet size: slightly bigger then the earth
Terrain: there are clouds and lava on the ground. the lava does not burn but rather freezes you if you dig too deeply through the multiple layers of rainbow colored clouds.
Ocean: There are multiple oceans, one is a shimmery glaze like texture, another is a chocolate ocean, and another is full of marshmallows- they melt into sticky goop or when solidified - bounces you way high up.
Atmosphere: cotton candy colors of Methane
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Offline 01-18-2017, 10:09 AM (This reply was last modified: 01-18-2017 10:12 AM by planetaryNuisance.)(Edited by planetaryNuisance.)
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RE: Breath of Creation
Planet Name: Polink
Planet Size: Imagine 1/2 of Jupiter.
Terrain: Mountainous, but there are large plains surrounding most mountain ranges. The landscape is mainly blue. Like a light blue.
Ocean: The vast majority of the surface area is water. The vast Majority of the water is frozen.
Atmosphere: Orange Nitrogen

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Offline 01-18-2017, 02:10 PM (This reply was last modified: 01-18-2017 11:46 PM by Trusty McCoolguy.)(Edited by Trusty McCoolguy.)
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RE: Breath of Creation
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The different ideas in your head merge, and you exhale, a little sigh of satisfaction. Miller-2, the planet you've always secretly dreamed of. Nitrogen, Oxygen, Methane, and Hydrogen Sulfide (in order from most to least), with a dash of the other usual gases in lesser amounts. Orange atmospheres, lighter blue-ish continents, large chocolate-colored oceans and smaller oceans that are partially frozen and a little blue. It's... gorgeous, and so very big, big enough to brave anything.

Looking back, it's already like you simply blinked since the planet began to form, but oh, oh, how long it's been since then to its glorious state now.

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Partially frigid seas, along with a strangely warm larger ocean, have created a wide variety of environments for life to begin, not to mention the environments on land.

The planet moves on fast forward again, and you revolve around the suns with it, always facing it and always enraptured with its movement through space. Time passes. The continents form, terrain takes shape, and plants begin to spread across the oceans and land.

With rocky mountains and valleys, there's a variety of altitudes, although for the most part the navy-colored dirt and light blue grasslands don't vary overly much; there are a lot of forests and rocky plateaus, but aside from that there aren't a lot of different biomes.

Single-celled organisms begin to form, and oh, there are a lot of them. Some evolve to multi-celled organisms, and the first organism to become self-aware does so in its infancy. It calls out to you, instinctively seeking guidance, and you deign to agree.

It is quiet and motionless, in a dark place. Something is all around it, enclosing it in this small, safe place.

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Now loading Manual2.txt...

Please input guidance for your new friend. Input a sense to use, or a type of action to take. Should it use some part of its body to do something? Should it look around?


Please include a sense you think it may have to use to find out more about its environment, AND/OR a body part that you think it may have in order to manipulate its environment.


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Offline 01-18-2017, 04:45 PM
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RE: Breath of Creation
> Take a deep breath and smell the air.
> Attempt to use your limbs to feel the area around yourself.

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Offline 01-18-2017, 10:39 PM
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RE: Breath of Creation
Hearing, and Leg (non plural)

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Offline 01-19-2017, 12:11 AM (This reply was last modified: 01-19-2017 12:23 AM by Trusty McCoolguy.)(Edited by Trusty McCoolguy.)
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RE: Breath of Creation
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You have to choose what to tell this new, innocent creature, now. You feel that you are not allowed to directly commune with them, merely give... clues, little nudges. So you nudge, and think of air and legs, and try to send it a thought of these things, instinctive abilities to move and sense.

It totters onto its feet, feeling springy, soft dirt beneath it, and then falls again, too young and uncoordinated yet to make its wobbly muscles obey. It then tries to scent the air. You feel, although distant, an echo of the sudden blast of other in the air, and something large moves in the small space. It's not just large... to the baby, it is giant. It is everything, and from the way it blocks the stream of fresh air into this place, it is also preventing the infant from escaping. The baby yips in surprise.

There's a faint, blurred impression of large, glowing eyes in the darkness, and teeth-- large, pointed front teeth. But the baby's eyes are weak, and can't see very well before it gives up trying and closes its eyes. Instead, it listens and smells again... there's heavy, close breathing. Another good sniff tells the baby more than anything else: this is at least omnivorous, for it smells of carnivore. Blood and meat are both strong smells here, rolling off of this large being's breath... and it's coming closer.



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Please input more guidance. Your young friend is too young to understand what is happening, and while you have merely tangential ideas about what is occurring, you surely know best. It may also get confusing referring to your young friend as 'it'; perhaps you should come up with a name.


Please include:
- A name
- A reaction

Some example reactions may include the following; run, attack, submit, or cry out. You are allowed, even encouraged, to make use of custom inputs should you feel the urge. However, please remember to keep it simple; Breath of Creation.exe is not truly intelligent (or sentient). For further information about Breath of Creation.exe, please refer to ␓ᵑ᧤᠖ᢓ.t#@.


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Offline 01-19-2017, 12:22 AM
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RE: Breath of Creation
Millarian, GET THE FUCK OUT OF THERE.

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